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A plague of hate swarms the world
Being passed around from mothers and fathers
The souls of children die by the second
Every day, parents feeding to them this sickness like candy
Perfection doesn't exist, who knew?
Drugs take this generation by storm
Influence overtaking our mind
Everything is a disease,
Our creator has failed us
Leaving us to fend for ourselves,
Survival of the fittest, fuck what you say
Trust no longer lives, it has rotted away
The sun will soon burn this earth
To the pile of ashes it deserves to be
Society corrupts our thoughts
Eats away self confidence
People kill to get what is desired,
Too lazy and impatient to work for what they want
Confused of the difference between want and need,
And we call ourselves the superior species
I believe everything evolved from us
Education they say is important,
Yet we recieve such poor useless lessons
Is America really a free country, we revolve around money,
Money which creates greed
Negative feelings, as you see, is what we are made of
Religion creates issues,
Racism turns us against ourselves and those that may be able to help
Why can't we accept eachother and go on with our lives?
Forgive and forget or forever we will be unhappy
Terrorists strike without warning,
Out of jealousy of what we pretend to have
Love and honesty will soon save us all
Hope is what we need now,
To over come and conquer this plague that kills us ever so slowly
©2004-2009 ~DerExitusEngel
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Author's Comments

This started out a poem, not quite sure what it is anymore. But I hope that you all will read it and understand my feelings. Everything said in here is all MY opinion, so please nobody get upset of what I've stated.

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:iconraptor-dp:
Great topic matter. For the most part I agree with what is said. Altho, one addition i would make is the fact that freedom is an illusion and likewise reality is a twisted illusion of the true nature of things, a true nature wich we will never know.

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:iconderexitusengel:
yeah ... *-sigh-* I feel like a minion sometimes. This world sucks, children grow up learning only hate. blah. Thanx for the comment
:iconyumelullaby:
thats so true O_O; i love this poem o-o it caught everything so true

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:iconderexitusengel:
-o) thank you ! at least SOMEONE read it
:iconyumelullaby:
O_O your welcome i loved it

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:iconyumelullaby:
yw =D

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:iconshadowoftwilight:
awesome poem, i tend to have a dark view of the world, o, and an observation, you seem to have a dim view of religon, im curious as to why that is (im a christian so its a bit of an interest to me, if you dont want to tell me then just tell me to bugger off ;) )
:iconderexitusengel:
I don't believe in God or Jesus and all that stuff. It's a long story and it'll just cause argument and lots of questions so I won't get into it. :-o :-o
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